How to Write a Band 9 Essay for IELTS Writing Task 2

Scoring a Band 9 in IELTS Writing Task 2 requires strong thinking, a clear structure, and attention to detail. If you’re preparing for IELTS, GRE, or TOEFL, writing well is one of the most valuable skills you can develop.

Here’s how to write a solid essay that meets the expectations of the IELTS examiner.


1. Know the Type of Question

IELTS Writing Task 2 questions fall into a few categories:

  • Agree or disagree
  • Discuss both views
  • Problem and solution
  • Two-part questions

Before you write anything, understand what the question is asking. Your answer must match the task. If you miss the question type, your whole essay can lose focus.


2. Use a Clear Structure

A strong essay usually follows this structure:

Introduction

  • Rewrite the question in your own words
  • Briefly mention your opinion if asked

Body Paragraph 1

  • State your first main idea
  • Explain it and give an example

Body Paragraph 2

  • State your second main idea or contrast
  • Explain and support with an example

Conclusion

  • Summarize your two points
  • Restate your opinion clearly if needed

Each paragraph should stay on one topic. Avoid jumping between ideas.


3. Write a Direct Introduction and Conclusion

Keep your introduction short. Say what the essay is about and where you stand.

Example
“Some people think the government should fund space exploration. Others believe the money should go to public services. This essay discusses both views and explains why public services should come first.”

For the conclusion, avoid repeating the same words. Just state your overall opinion based on what you wrote.

Example
“Although space programs have benefits, spending on health and education has a more direct and lasting impact on people’s lives.”


4. Use Formal but Natural Language

Aim for clear and academic vocabulary. Avoid slang and contractions. You don’t need rare words, just the right ones in the right places.

Examples

  • “A big problem” → “A serious issue”
  • “Lots of people” → “Many individuals”
  • “Good” → “Useful” or “Effective”

Don’t force complicated words. If a simple word fits, use it.


5. Use a Range of Sentences

Vary your sentence length and structure. Mix simple and complex forms. Use linking words, but don’t overdo them.

Example
“While space travel may offer long-term benefits, most countries still struggle to provide basic services like clean water and education.”

Practice writing conditionals, relative clauses, and passive voice. These help you meet the grammar criteria.


6. Support Your Ideas with Reasons

Every point you make should be backed by logic, data, or examples. Don’t leave statements unexplained.

Weak
“Education is important.”

Better
“Access to quality education allows individuals to gain skills that contribute to the economy and reduce poverty.”

Examples do not have to be real-life stories. A simple, believable situation works well.


7. Manage Your Time

You have 40 minutes. Use your time like this:

  • 5 minutes to plan
  • 30 minutes to write
  • 5 minutes to check for mistakes

Planning helps you avoid repeating ideas or going off-topic. Leave time to check your spelling, grammar, and clarity.


8. Read Good Essays and Practice Often

Look at strong sample essays and notice how they’re built. Practice writing your own responses to past questions. Ask for feedback and revise your work.


Final Note

Writing a Band 9 essay isn’t about using fancy phrases. It’s about having a clear point of view, explaining your ideas well, and keeping your writing organised. With practice, it becomes a habit.


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